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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #15 on: August 18, 2004, 06:31:38 PM »
How do I make a proper haiku? I once made one, but G3K told me it's flawed!!!!!  :-(
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G3K

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #16 on: August 18, 2004, 08:20:24 PM »
A haiku is constructed of three lines, the first of which has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third five.
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dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2004, 04:13:43 AM »
Lemmings are stupid
They go off cliffs and in water
Then they don't exist
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Re: Haikus
« Reply #18 on: August 19, 2004, 04:21:25 AM »
That second line is eight. It should be seven.
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #19 on: August 19, 2004, 04:02:49 PM »
Sonic the Hedgehog,
Is as fast as a cheetah,
And is very, very cool.

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dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #20 on: August 19, 2004, 11:19:33 PM »
Quote from: Streetlight Admnistrator 370  link=1092218902/15#18 date=1092889285
That second line is eight. It should be seven.



oops. i must be getting dumber. when i counted it out it was right.  :P
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Offline Liebatron

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #21 on: August 20, 2004, 01:59:00 AM »
Mr. stapler sta down on a lemming.
"who are you you dumb idiot?"
"i'm a stapler, twit!"
"does a bear bounce?"
"uh.no"

it's in almost no way related to lemmings but atleast it's a haiku...whaddaya think? ;)(i found out how to do one anyway.)
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #22 on: August 20, 2004, 02:01:09 AM »
That's not a haiku. It's flawed, I'm afraid.
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Offline Liebatron

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #23 on: August 20, 2004, 02:02:34 AM »
whats wrong with it? did i mess up on the syllables?(translation, i messed up on the syllables.)
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #24 on: August 20, 2004, 02:05:30 AM »
Not just that, look! That haiku has five lines, not three!
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Offline Liebatron

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« Reply #25 on: August 20, 2004, 02:09:54 AM »
oh......... >:( why does everyone tell me how to do something after i do it?.......oh well.

"since when does a dead bear bounce?"
"I just saw one bounce"
"wierd haiku"
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #26 on: August 20, 2004, 02:38:13 AM »
Flawed.
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Offline Liebatron

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #27 on: August 20, 2004, 02:39:09 AM »
what now?
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #28 on: August 20, 2004, 02:44:16 AM »
Don't get mad, dumb_lem. I'll help you.

The first line has five syllables.
The second line has seven syllables.
The third line has five syllables.

Try again, okay?
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Offline Liebatron

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #29 on: August 20, 2004, 02:45:44 AM »
geez, i"ve got alotta work to do before i get this right the first time...
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