Author Topic: Haikus  (Read 19783 times)

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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #30 on: August 20, 2004, 04:07:11 AM »
Don't worry, Dumb Lem,
You can do it! Go, go, go!
I'm counting on you!

Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #31 on: August 20, 2004, 03:02:51 PM »
I'm not a loser.
Stop being so mean, Steaver!
I really mean it.

dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #32 on: August 20, 2004, 03:11:30 PM »
poor ice eagle!   :-(

Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #33 on: August 20, 2004, 03:35:45 PM »
Don't worry, buddy.
It's okay, no need to cry.
I'm okay, alright?

But not that okay.
Steaver teased me really bad!
Can't he stop it now?

dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #34 on: August 21, 2004, 03:15:20 AM »
first haiku, first line, has 6 syllables. just pointing it out.

second haiku is good :D

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #35 on: August 21, 2004, 06:16:37 AM »
I am not a dog.
Who called me a stupid cat?
Lemmings are insane.


(That has to be the most random Haiku ever)
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #36 on: August 21, 2004, 01:52:57 PM »
A haiku about dark_phoenix:

Dark_phoenix is great.
She's like a very good friend.
She's so nice after all.

Andi

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #37 on: August 21, 2004, 02:34:06 PM »
But she said "Lemmings are STUPID". It was you who said stupid is a bad word.

Lemeri

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #38 on: August 21, 2004, 02:35:06 PM »
By the way, is dumb a bad word?

Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #39 on: August 21, 2004, 02:37:07 PM »
Well, even if she says st*pid, I still think she's a nice person. Let's just not mind these bad words. Let the mods handle it.

Lemeri

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #40 on: August 21, 2004, 04:39:46 PM »
No problem. It was your idea to make a big deal about them in the first place.

dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #41 on: August 22, 2004, 04:08:51 PM »
Quote from: Andi  link=1092218902/30#37 date=1093098846
But she said "Lemmings are STUPID". It was you who said stupid is a bad word.



if u didnt know, i meant as in "dimwitted". not i hate them.

dark_phoenix

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #42 on: August 22, 2004, 04:10:27 PM »
Quote from: Ice_Eagle91  link=1092218902/30#36 date=1093096377
A haiku about dark_phoenix:

Dark_phoenix is great.
She's like a very good friend.
She's so nice after all.



thank you.   :D you seem quite nice yourself.

Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #43 on: August 22, 2004, 10:58:45 PM »
You're welcome.  :D Oh, and thank you, too!

Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Haikus
« Reply #44 on: August 22, 2004, 11:05:26 PM »
Quote from: dark_phoenix  link=1092218902/30#34 date=1093058120
first haiku, first line, has 6 syllables. just pointing it out.

second haiku is good :D


Those are stanzas, dark phoenix.

I fixed the first line on the first stanza.