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Offline Lemika

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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #15 on: July 16, 2004, 01:53:57 PM »
Those are all good :D

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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #16 on: July 16, 2004, 06:01:34 PM »
Mayhem 24...
Just bash left, then right, then left.
What were they thinking?

"They", of course, referring to the game developers who placed that level so late in the game.

And this one only took me 22 seconds. I can write a haiku on almost anything in under a minute.
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #17 on: July 18, 2004, 02:24:10 PM »
Insane Steve's haikus:
It only takes one minuite
to write one of those
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #18 on: July 19, 2004, 06:02:30 AM »
Mayhem 29...
What were they thinking with this?
It's true insanity.
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #19 on: July 20, 2004, 05:16:31 AM »
Steaver's haiku's flawed:
the last line isn't correct
with six syllables.

This one took me about 45 seconds.
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #20 on: July 21, 2004, 03:38:17 AM »
It doesn't matter
If there are some small mistakes
In these haikus

Ten seconds!
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #21 on: July 21, 2004, 07:22:37 AM »
Taxing 15...
The level design is great...
It is very AWESOME.

Took 15 seconds.
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #22 on: July 21, 2004, 03:23:41 PM »
I think your haiku is flawed too.
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #23 on: July 21, 2004, 03:30:16 PM »
One more syllable
is needed in the first line;
one less in the last.

22 seconds.

HAIKU FORM:

[5 syllables]
[7 syllables]
[5 syllables]
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #24 on: July 22, 2004, 04:31:58 AM »
Taxing 11
Could have given more time there
There is just enough

About 30 seconds. ^_^
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #25 on: July 23, 2004, 09:51:20 PM »
I like all lemmings
They are cute, they are funny
I really like them
;P
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #26 on: August 20, 2004, 01:38:10 AM »
 :D  that'sgood  ,I like it. there's one big roadblock stopping me from writing a haiku. i have no idea what the requirements for a poem to be a haiku are.
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Ice_Eagle91

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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #27 on: August 20, 2004, 01:41:45 AM »
A haiku contains three lines.

The first has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third had five.

Thanks to G3K!  :)
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #28 on: August 20, 2004, 03:27:19 AM »
ok thanks.

this is not that hard
haikus are really easy
they are fun to do

25 seconds
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Re: Lemming Poetry XD
« Reply #29 on: August 25, 2004, 01:30:28 AM »
A mistake: Second line have 8 syllables... X_X
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