The serious 5 word story.

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namida

July 25, 2009, 11:44:52 AM
The rules are the same as 5 word story, but with one twist:
Instead of trying to be random, you have to try to make sense and keep it serious. As in basically, trying to write a completely normal story, except for the "five words per person". I'll start:

Melissa woke up from her...
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Dullstar

#1
July 30, 2009, 10:52:44 PM
herself in the mirror, and

namida

#2
July 31, 2009, 07:32:14 AM
sighed. "Another day of life."

[NOTE: I edited this only to change the comma to a full stop, as otherwise the next post doesn't flow on very well from it.]
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Dullstar

#3
July 31, 2009, 09:45:05 PM
She had become a beautiful

namida

#4
August 01, 2009, 11:45:47 AM
young girl over the last
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namida

#5
August 01, 2009, 05:28:44 PM
to a lot of effort
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Dullstar

#6
August 01, 2009, 06:58:09 PM
and ate five grapes every

Dullstar

#7
August 01, 2009, 07:33:16 PM
eat anything else and was

Dullstar

#8
August 01, 2009, 09:45:45 PM
climb the Empire State Building.

namida

#9
August 02, 2009, 08:08:32 AM
The last few posts are clearly either not serious, or while serious in themself have been in response to posts that are not. Therefore, unfortunately they must be dropped. That kind of material is more suited for the other 5 word story topic.

Quote from: The story so far.
Melissa woke up from her bad dream. She looked at herself in the mirror, and sighed.  "Another day of life."
She had become a beautiful young girl over the last couple of weeks. She went to a lot of effort...

Remember: The idea is to write something completely serious, and the only unusual thing about it is the five words at a time per writer. If you want to be crazy, that's what the other Five Word Story is there for.
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Dullstar

#10
August 02, 2009, 06:49:47 PM
It's kind of hard to do it with the five word limit.

What, we just said she had the urge to climb the Empire State Building!  lol

Adam

#11
August 03, 2009, 01:23:55 AM
The posts in this thread have been brought to my attention.

Unfortunately, there isn't a clear line between serious and light-hearted, so I'm going to say this... if your continuation of the story doesn't sound realistic, it probably isn't serious.

namida

#12
August 04, 2009, 10:15:00 AM
Adam pretty much said it.
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Dullstar

#13
August 05, 2009, 01:52:19 AM
to take Yoga classes every

namida

#14
August 05, 2009, 08:02:04 AM
week, in order to help
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Dullstar

#15
August 06, 2009, 03:16:00 AM
the amount of stress in

namida

#16
August 06, 2009, 06:09:56 AM
her daily life. She felt
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Dullstar

#17
August 08, 2009, 01:45:17 AM
happy at these classes and

namida

#18
August 08, 2009, 10:00:29 AM
yet, sometimes she wondered if
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#19
August 08, 2009, 10:55:15 PM
there was another way to

namida

#20
August 09, 2009, 12:14:36 AM
improve her life. Little did
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#21
August 09, 2009, 06:54:20 PM
she know that the people

namida

#22
August 10, 2009, 06:01:16 AM
she saw there would soon
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Dullstar

#23
August 10, 2009, 06:41:49 PM
become her best friends and

Dullstar

#24
August 14, 2009, 08:08:43 PM
people she meant were not

namida

#25
August 15, 2009, 09:35:20 AM
like others she previously knew.
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Dullstar

#26
August 16, 2009, 12:52:49 AM
She may never know whether

namida

#27
August 16, 2009, 03:17:31 AM
this was a good thing
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#28
August 16, 2009, 05:11:55 AM
or a bad thing.  This

namida

#29
August 16, 2009, 02:06:12 PM
was the one thing she
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Dullstar

#30
August 17, 2009, 02:41:33 AM
absolutely hated.  She sighed and

namida

#31
August 17, 2009, 05:48:20 AM
looked into the sky. "Why
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Dullstar

#32
August 17, 2009, 06:05:39 PM
am I looking into the

Fernito

#33
August 18, 2009, 04:14:58 AM
sky? Am I looking for
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Dullstar

#34
August 18, 2009, 05:14:08 PM
something?  Hmmm...  I'll just sit

Fernito

#35
August 18, 2009, 10:00:11 PM
down and think about everything
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Dullstar

#36
August 19, 2009, 04:32:02 AM
while I stare at clouds."

Mariachi Skeletron Prime

#37
November 06, 2014, 09:31:32 PM
Then she got bored and  http://www.lemmingsforums.com/Smileys/lemmings/devil.gif" alt=":evil:" title="Evil" class="smiley" />

mobius

#38
June 12, 2017, 01:18:22 AM
saw a cloud shaped like

[this kind of thing is good for inspiration, be creative!]
everything by me: https://www.lemmingsforums.net/index.php?topic=5982.msg96035#msg96035

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WillLem

#39
December 26, 2020, 03:12:19 PM
a beautiful swan, majestic and

The64Watcher

#40
August 03, 2025, 02:53:05 PM
it really really stinked bad.
How did thee arrive in this place?
https://www.lemmingsforums.net/index.php?topic=7303.msg107538#new see the lemming races in full swing!

Baldem1990

#41
April 21, 2026, 01:02:20 AM
However, they all go home.
The sable exited his home, took the trail, sable walks into the moving stream, went into a waterfall, got lost, and found a sable community nearby. He could use his climbing skills to get back at his home after living in the sable community after one day...
(My fictional game of Sables (a Chinese clone) based on Lemmings)
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